Her final remarks on my paper were:
Your paper is good, although I feel like the first half of the paper is spent explaining the relations between the U.S. and the Soviet Union, and not analyzing or arguing. This can be easily fixed: every now and then, just insert a little sentence that relates directly back to your thesis. Also, you can change the topic sentence of each paragraph to an argument. Overall, it was very good.
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